Well, the animation was pretty smooth and good, actually.
The major let-down is that it is, indeed, very short. It made little to no point.
I suggest that you extend this and make a longer animation with more content and story.
The Argonian race happens to be my favorite race too, and I would like to see a full-length animation with story and quality next time.
I liked this and you should keep animating!
This was extremely poorly made.
The animation was too short and pretty pointless. If you want to be funny you'll have to come up with something original, almost weird in most peoples eyes. You can make something good with this if you just think in ways that most people don't. This humor isn't very funny.
Keep trying, you'll get there.
This is awesome for a first-timer!
As this being said, it could move on a little bit quicker in the beginning. You don't want to make impatient people start to get bored. That could easily result in bad scores. But don't listen to the score, listen to the message of the story and what YOU think. It's better to do what you want rather than to listen too much on what other people say.
Keep on going like this, it was awesome! Even the music was good, but it could also be improved.
This. This is nearly FENOMENAL.
One thing that could be impoved is that it would be better if you changed music to something more fitting when it comes to their actions. When the good old Charmander was sexing up ratatouille, I would suggest music like (if there is any) PokÃ©mon theme mixed with the 80's porno music.
Just a thought.
Other than that, this was sick and shouldn't have more than a 2.
OOO SHIZZ! This.... Is.... AWESOME! 5/5
I get the joke, but it just keeps being funny for like 15 sec or something. But anyways, you've always been one of my favourite animators!
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